Ek pagal pagal si ladki…
dil toornay se darti thi…….
har pal har lamha khud se woh jhagarti thi…
ansoo kiun aye kisi ankh
main mujrim khud ko samujhti thi…
ghuut ghuut k jeeti rehti thi…
har sans ulajhti rehti thi…
soo baar kaha aaay nadan larki..!!!
dunya ko dekhna choor day…
khud se ulajhna choor day…
pal pal bikherna choor day..
yahan HAASSASS DIl to koi nahi….
yahan NAZUKi say kaam na lay…
yahan pather banna parta hai…
yahan rehumdilli say kaam na lay…
soo barr kaha par kaisay nasamjhi…. !!!
dunya ko sub samujhti thi…
phir wohi hoa jo hona tha…..
dil toota uska jiska ussay roona tha…
BHAROSAY ki deewar girri …
SARD LEHJI haar baar mili….
phir simat gaye apni zaat main…
tamaam dukhon ko samaitay anchal main…
ankhon main jazbaat nahi..
pahlay say halaaat nahi…
Farq srif itna hoa…
khud apni zaaat ko TOOR dia…
tanhayeyoun se rishta jorr dia..
phir tanha tanha rehni lagi…
phir khud ko PATHEr kahnay lagi…
WOH IK PAGAL PAGAL SI LARKI….
JO DIL TOORNAY SE DARTI THI ……!!!!!! !!!!


hi
hiiiiiiiiiiiii shital
really its wonder full!!!!!!!!!!11111111 i like this
MIND BLOWING POEM. REALLY REALLY IT’S TOUCHS MY HEART.
ZABARDAST
okk soo i understood ths sum wut……
the bits tht i did understand are cute….
but i still dun get it…:S
it’s realy a heartly poem..dil ko chhuti hai…
a heart exploding poem
Kya kya nahi kiya unke liye
Sab kuch loot gaya unhe paane ke liye
Ghar chhora unse milne ke liye
Duniya se lada unko hasil karne ke liye
Gali gali ghuma unhe dekhne ke liye
Unhe yaad karta tha..muskurane ke liye
Logo ne kaha..tu pagal ho gaya hai uske liye
Magar unhe kya pata…woh kya hai mere liye
Kuch bhi kar sakta hu..unhe paane ke liye
Yaad aate hai woh din ab…
Jab woh kehti thi ki..woh bani hai mere liye
Vada kiya tha ki saath rahenge janam janam ke liye
Abhi bhi yaad hai woh din..jab milne gaya tha unse mein
Unhone kaha ki bhool jaavo hume ab zindagi bhar ke liye
Unse pyaar itna karta tha ki..pooch bhi na paaya kis liye….
gopal lahoti
acchi shayariyo ke liye dekhe
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Hey its very nice poem. . .it touch to my heart. . .mind blowing. .
This is not a poem, its a real feeling of one girl who have a good & true heart i just like to tell him ple. dont be tried to be cruel because till now some are here who are very good at heart & i really like to meet that people. Keep smiling…
& always be with ur heart but according to this world ple. use ur brain too..
Regards & wishes
Rakesh
itna jakkas mei tho bht bht impress hoi ise parh ke …
vivek Joshi,
App ne tu waqi joshily shaiery ki hay, Bohat bohat achi hay, keep it up.God bless u, Always keeep smilling may Allah helps u in every field of life, Kuch or Khubsorat si shairy ka intizar rahay ga.
Regards
Sajjad Ahmed
KHANSAHEB
Dubai
I never knew akk r mad like me…n never even guessed that someone could read a girl,s heart so well..Y all the girls have to suffer same destiny..If it is destined why do they love n make someone’s life miserable
????
It hurts..!If girls can’t take a decesion why are they blessed with heart and a divine friend..
Thankyou for weaving a crying heart’s emotions in the thread of poetry!
dis iz da bst yar its som1 real lyf story nd has got effects in da words really it feelss 2 me dat i can c nd feel da emotions still being away 4rm dem
really the bst gr8 work done keep it up
bst of luck
its really a very nice poem…….it happened with me too, but my story was a little different….and i cn feel the pain of the poet…best of luck good work
Khasmosh say lab ankhoon main nami hoti hai
Teri yaad jo aati hai to kuch aaisi aada hoti hai
Ankhoon ko band kar k us ko main sochoon to
Khamosh andharay main bas uski nigaah hoti hai
Ab ya duniya meri muha veeran si lagti hai
Khushboo teri na hoti hai na teri sada hoti hai
Jis desh bhi jao tum woh desh tumhara ho
Ab haath jo uthta hain to yahi dua hoti haiā¦!!
Bahar se nafrat thi,
Par dil me wo mere basta tha !
Wo pagal sa ek ladka,
Jo dekh ke mujhko hansta tha !!
Kyun thukraya ? mang ko uski,
Soch ke ab pachhtati hu !
Dil ke badle dil manga tha,
sauda kitna sasta tha !!
Kisse puchhu ? kaise puchhu ?
Kyun nahi deta ab dikhayi !
Roz guzarta tha wo idhar se,
Uska yahi rasta tha !!
Dard chhupa kar jeena uski,
bahut purani adat thi !
Bheetar-bheetar rota tha wo,
bahar-bahar hansta tha !!
Pankaj Goyal
Jai Mata Di……
this is very nice poetry
Gar meri jindagi mein tum jo naa aatein,
To jindagi chand panno mein simat kar reh jaati,
Jo khawab dekhe the maine,who phool ki bhanti toot kar
bikhar jaatein,
Ek dost ban kar mujhe risto ki ahmiyato ko samjhaya,
Gar meri jindagi mein tum jo naa aatein,
Toh phool ki bhanti toot kar bikhar jaatein,
nice one