Comments on: Ek pagal pagal si larki.. (Hindi Poem)

By: sonu bhardwaj

sonu bhardwaj — Mon, 13 Dec 2010 06:02:41 +0000

nice poem

By: arun kumar sharma

arun kumar sharma — Thu, 13 May 2010 06:03:48 +0000

ankho se hokar tere dil me bas jane ki tammana hai,
dawa bankar tere har dard ko mitane ki tammana hai,
yun to hasil hai duniya ki har khushi mujhe, bas
ek baar tujhe dulhan ke rup me pane ki tammana hai.

koi tumhe itna chahe to batana,
tumhare har nakre uthae to batana,
payar to karte hai sabhi, par
meri tarah use koi nibhaye to batana,

By: Jigar

Jigar — Tue, 24 Nov 2009 12:42:38 +0000

nice one

By: Nirmal

Nirmal — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 15:29:16 +0000

Gar meri jindagi mein tum jo naa aatein,
To jindagi chand panno mein simat kar reh jaati,
Jo khawab dekhe the maine,who phool ki bhanti toot kar
bikhar jaatein,
Ek dost ban kar mujhe risto ki ahmiyato ko samjhaya,
Gar meri jindagi mein tum jo naa aatein,
Toh phool ki bhanti toot kar bikhar jaatein,

By: Nirmal

Nirmal — Mon, 09 Nov 2009 15:28:11 +0000

this is very nice poetry

By: pankaj

pankaj — Sun, 06 Sep 2009 08:12:27 +0000

Bahar se nafrat thi,
Par dil me wo mere basta tha !
Wo pagal sa ek ladka,
Jo dekh ke mujhko hansta tha !!

Kyun thukraya ? mang ko uski,
Soch ke ab pachhtati hu !
Dil ke badle dil manga tha,
sauda kitna sasta tha !!

Kisse puchhu ? kaise puchhu ?
Kyun nahi deta ab dikhayi !
Roz guzarta tha wo idhar se,
Uska yahi rasta tha !!

Dard chhupa kar jeena uski,
bahut purani adat thi !
Bheetar-bheetar rota tha wo,
bahar-bahar hansta tha !!

Pankaj Goyal
Jai Mata Di……

By: pankaj

pankaj — Sun, 06 Sep 2009 08:04:06 +0000

Khasmosh say lab ankhoon main nami hoti hai
Teri yaad jo aati hai to kuch aaisi aada hoti hai

Ankhoon ko band kar k us ko main sochoon to
Khamosh andharay main bas uski nigaah hoti hai

Ab ya duniya meri muha veeran si lagti hai
Khushboo teri na hoti hai na teri sada hoti hai

Jis desh bhi jao tum woh desh tumhara ho
Ab haath jo uthta hain to yahi dua hoti haiâ€¦!!

By: monty

monty — Tue, 03 Mar 2009 07:44:13 +0000

its really a very nice poem…….it happened with me too, but my story was a little different….and i cn feel the pain of the poet…best of luck good work

By: waqas khan

waqas khan — Mon, 16 Feb 2009 22:42:25 +0000

dis iz da bst yar its som1 real lyf story nd has got effects in da words really it feelss 2 me dat i can c nd feel da emotions still being away 4rm dem

really the bst gr8 work done keep it up
bst of luck

By: rj

rj — Thu, 18 Dec 2008 18:34:09 +0000

I never knew akk r mad like me…n never even guessed that someone could read a girl,s heart so well..Y all the girls have to suffer same destiny..If it is destined why do they love n make someone’s life miserable
????
It hurts..!If girls can’t take a decesion why are they blessed with heart and a divine friend..

Thankyou for weaving a crying heart’s emotions in the thread of poetry!